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Happy Halloween! October 31, 2008

Filed under: Fire and Ice,Update,names — Karen @ 11:03 pm

Happy Halloween everyone!  I hope everyone was safe and got tons of candy.  My kids sure did.  (Gotta love those Recess Cups!)

I’m now sitting here, getting ready for the 2008 National Novel Writing Month to begin in just over an hour from now.  For the month of November I will be writing the sequal to “Fire and Ice” even though I have the thrid and fourth in the series written.  I know, its silly of my not to have written year 2 before going for 3 and 4 but I blame my inspiration for the little time warp.

I’m looking forward to getting back to writing new stuff for Bobbie and the rest of the Philadelphia Fire.  One of the hardest parts is deciding who to cut or trade from the team.  At least I know who has to stick around for the season if they appear in book 3 or 4.

So, now I need a title for book 2.  I’ve got a few ideas running around but nothing is really getting me at the moment.  I’d love to hear any suggestions!

Just a reminder, “Fire and Ice” is on sale both in digital and print formats at www.FireballPublishing.net!

 
 

I’m up on Twitter October 20, 2008

Filed under: Fire and Ice,Update — Karen @ 10:33 pm

I’ve decided to try Twitter out.  To get inside my brain a bit more, you can follow me at http://twitter.com/KarenWriter.

With me doing the 2008 National Novel Writing Month starting on November 1st I’m sure I’ll be either “tweeting” with ideas to “Fire and Ice”s sequal or when I’m procrastinating writing it.

 
 

They’re in!

Filed under: Fire and Ice,Update — Karen @ 8:47 am

The books came in Friday and look fantastic!  I could have not imagined them to look any better.  It’s almost too much to see my own book in print.

“Fire and Ice” has been in my computer since 2003 and I’ve worked hard on it for over the past year to get it ready to send out to the world.  I hope the world enjoys it because I truly enjoyed writing it and all the other stuff that goes into making a book.

I’ve learned a lot during the process and know that I have so much more to learn but I’ve got many stories to tell and now that I’ve gotten it all started, I can’t see me ever stopping.

So, if you like what you’ve read so far, please go over to my publisher’s site and buy a copy (little bit of begging there).  The adventure is just beginning for Bobbie and Connor!

Fireball Publishing Bookstore

 
 

It’s up! October 16, 2008

Filed under: Fire and Ice,Update — Karen @ 2:26 pm

Fireball Publishing has just launched their bookstore!

They are offering “Fire and Ice” in paperback, pdf and Mobi/prc versions.

Please go on over there and check it out!

 
 

One More Day!

Filed under: Fire and Ice,Update — Karen @ 8:58 am

I just received word that the copies of “Fire and Ice” will be arriving TOMORROW.  Yes, that’s Friday!

As soon as they arrive, they will be available for purchase at my publisher’s site, FireballPublishing.net on their “bookstore” page.  With that in mind, they will begin selling the ECopy in PDF format.  They are working on a Mobi format as well if anyone prefers Mobi.  An audio version is also in the works.

For now, all sales will be done via PayPal or by mailing a check or money order to the office.  (All check will have to clear the bank before the books get shipped.)  All funds must be in US Dollars.

Shipping – ECopies will be directly emailed to the recipient after PayPal informs us of the payment.  Hard copies will be mailed out as soon as humanly possible. We will ship internationally!

This is a very exciting day.  I can’t believe it’s actually here!

 
 

Cover art October 14, 2008

Filed under: Fire and Ice,Update,preview — Karen @ 2:30 pm

In the middle of getting “Fire and Ice” ready for printing, we totally forgot to post the cover art.

Without further ado, the cover of “Fire and Ice”.

Cover of "Fire and Ice"

Cover of

 
 

“Fire and Ice” Chapter 1 Part 2 October 11, 2008

Filed under: Fire and Ice,preview — Karen @ 1:52 pm

When practice was over for the day, they all headed off to the locker rooms to change. Once cleaned up and changed the rookies and new players headed off to the press conference. Connor stood off to the side just out of camera view so that he could watch how the new players reacted to the press and how Bobbie handled herself. As Connor expected, Doug and Thom waited until all the other players had been interviewed to introduce Bobbie because they knew that the press would not care about any other player after they heard about her.
“Bobbie, where did you play before coming to Philadelphia?” one reporter asked.
“I grew up outside of Boston and played in many of the amateur leagues,” she replied hoping she didn’t sound like a fool as the cameras flashed in her eyes.
“What do you think about playing professional hockey?” another reporter asked.
“I come from a family of hockey players. My brothers and I practically grew up on skates and we all dreamed of playing in the pros. I am really looking forward to the season,” she replied, trying to hide her nervousness behind her smile.
“Do you think you will be able to keep up with the men on the team?”
“I played Division One hockey at New England State University on the men’s team since there was no woman’s team at the time, and I had no problem keeping up with them. I know that this is not college hockey but all I can do is give it my all and work hard. The staff is the finest in the league and will do their best to get the team to peak performance.”
“How does it feel to be the first woman to play professional hockey during the regular season?” another reporter asked.
Before answering, Bobbie took a breath as she realized the importance of her position on the team and in the sport. “I am honored that the organization has given me this chance to play the game I have loved all my life. As for being the first woman, I don’t see it like that. I am just a hockey player and have been all my life.”
“Okay everyone, we have to get back to camp so lets rap this up,” Doug told the reporters.
The photographers needed to get their shots of the new players with their jerseys. Bobbie held up her red jersey and looked at the name “Burke” and the white number nine sewn on the back. She couldn’t help but smile from ear to ear as she held up her jersey for the world to see, expecting it to be yanked out of her hands at any second. Barbara Burke had made it to the big time. The first woman to get there for more than a single game and, more importantly, the first member of the Burke family to go professional. She had finally done the one thing her older brothers never did.

On the way back to the hotel that was her home until she found an apartment her cell phone began to ring. Bobbie answered.
“Hello?”
“Hello, this is Laura Volincoff. Is this Bobbie Burke?” the woman asked.
“Yes.”
“Well, I just wanted to welcome you to the area.”
“Thank you. You’re the first.”
“I hope the boys weren’t too rough on you today.”
“Nothing I couldn’t handle. You are Aleks’s wife?” Bobbie asked, wondering the motivation of the call.
“Yes, I am. I am also the president of the Wives’ Club. On Saturday, Aleks and I are throwing a cookout to welcome everyone back and to meet the new guys and their families. I hope you can make it.”
“Uh, sure I guess,” Bobbie replied a bit unsure of how she would be received by the wives of her teammates, especially since she would be spending more time with their husbands than they would be all season.
“Great,” Laura said enthusiastically. “And your husband or boyfriend is also invited.”
“I don’t have either. Something about a woman hockey player doesn’t really make men line up outside my door.”
“Oh,” Laura said awkwardly. “Well I hope you can still make it.”
“Sure, I haven’t met anyone down here except the team yet.”
“When did you arrive in the area?” Laura asked.
“Yesterday, I only had three days to get down here so I am staying in a hotel until I can find an apartment.”
“You don’t have an apartment yet? If you need some help, please let me know.”
“Thank you Laura. I will,” Bobbie said not completely sure of the woman’s intentions. The two women spoke for a few more minutes, and Laura gave Bobbie directions to the house.
Laura had seemed sincere with her offer and Bobbie tried her best not to put more meaning into the conversation than there probably was. She had been on the defensive for so long that it was hard to trust outsiders. In her role as a sports pioneer, breaking the gender barriers down, Bobbie was even less trusting of new people. Most people disliked change, especially when she was the reason their world was being rearranged.

“So how’d you survive your first day, sis?” Brandon asked over the phone.
“Not bad. They need a lot of work,” she told him as she kicked off her suit pants, glad to get out of them and into her comfortable jeans.
“Any problems you need your big brother to take care of for you?” he joked.
“You’re just looking for any excuse to come down here, aren’t you?” she teased back, happy for the familiar banter that they always had between them.
“Dad’s been going nuts worrying about you.”
“He must be, but I’m fine down here. Tell him not to worry. The press hasn’t figured out where my hotel is, yet, and the guys on the team seem harmless.”
“Easier said than done, Bob. You’ll always be his baby. He was glued to ESPN during Sports Center until your press conference hit. He even taped it.”
“Was it just me or did they talk about the other new guys on the team as well?” she asked, hoping she wasn’t the one being reported on.
“Others were mentioned but it was mostly you. I think even Dad teared up when you held up your jersey.”
Bobbie closed her eyes for a second, remembering how good but terrifying it felt in front of the press for the first time as she held up her jersey for the first time. It was a moment she would always remember. “I was hoping I wasn’t the focus. That’s only going to make things harder.”
“You’re news Bob; of course they focused on you.”
“I just hope it doesn’t last too long. I got a call from one of the wives today,” she said, changing the subject.
“I hope she was nice to you.”
“She was. They’re having some sort of cookout for the team and their families this weekend.”
“You going?’ Brandon asked skeptically.
“It was hard to say no to her. She’s the head of the Wives’ Club.”
“Then you better be on your best behavior.”
“You know me better than that,” she mock-protested. Talking to her brother always made Bobbie feel better. Normally, she would be sitting on Brandon’s bed after traversing the minefield that he called his bedroom floor, but this hotel bed would work for now.

 
 

Site Update October 8, 2008

Filed under: Update — Karen @ 3:44 pm

I’ve just updated my awards page.  Check it out!  There’s even links to some of the stories (hosted graciously at Moon Mistress‘s site).

As soon as I scan in the actual award, I’ll post the essay that won the Junior Woman’s Club award.

 
 

Fire and Ice – Chapter 1, Part 1

Filed under: Fire and Ice,preview — Karen @ 1:42 pm

As promised, here’s the first part of Chapter 1.

“So Burke, do you understand the terms of your contract?” Thomas Browne, the team’s president asked his newest player. General Manager Louis Greenwood and Head Coach Douglass “Doug” Levy flanked the president as they looked over the rookie, their newest free agent acquisition to the hockey team.
“Yes, sir. Score goals, win games or go home,” Bobbie replied, sitting across from the three older men in a small conference room and trying to act cool, like this kind of thing happened everyday. The walls of the conference room were filled with team memorabilia and photos of greats from the past, intimidating any rookie hoping to eventually join their ranks.
“Then we have an understanding. Welcome to the Philadelphia Fire,” Thom said as they shook hands, sealing the deal and hoping they hadn’t shot themselves in the foot, again.

Inside the team meeting room later that September day, the members of the Philadelphia Fire had gathered, many for the first time since the end of previous season. The volume was louder than usual as the men caught up with each other, just like boys on the first day of school. Someone just looking in the room would see well-dressed men clustered in small groups. But if that person were to listen to the conversations, there were at least four different languages being spoken plus English, and many of those speaking English had accents so thick that they almost sounded like they were speaking other languages.
“Connor,when did you get in?” the massive Russian defenseman, Aleksander Volincoff asked as he shook the team Captain’s hand.
“Yesterday. How are Laura and the girls?” Connor McNutly asked the Russian with only a hint of his own Canadian accent showing. Even though Connor was six foot two, Aleks had four inches and at least forty pounds of muscle over his Captain. On skates, Aleks towered over most of the world, He looked like a big Russian bear with his chiseled chin and brown hair where Connor looked more like a business man than a hockey player with his deep brown eyes and black hair that he kept precisely styled when he wasn’t on the ice.
“They are good. Laura wanted me to tell you that you are coming over for dinner this week, Thursday. The girls missed you this summer. Have you heard about the new center? I think they just signed ‘em today.”
“Last I talked to Doug, they hadn’t finalized the roster yet. Where’s he from?” Connor asked, hoping that they had not stacked the deck with too many fresh faces from the rookie camp the week before.
“Boston. Burke’s the name. Bob… Bobby Burke… and he wasn’t at rookie camp either.”
“I remember my brother playing against a Brandon Burke in college, eh. He was from Boston too. Where’d he play before?”
“Rookie, a free agent too.”
“Then it can’t be the guy I’m thinking of. He was defense.” Connor brushed it off as they continued to catch up from their summer breaks. Aleks had gone back to Russia for a good part of it and Connor had returned home to Toronto for a few weeks.
Doug, the head coach, walked into the room with a small entourage of coaches, trainers and other miscellaneous staff following behind him as the team began to take their seats. “Okay guys. Sit down so we can get started,” said Doug. “They’re all yours, Thom.”
“Thanks, Doug,” the President of the team began and he stepped into the room and headed straight to the front of the team meeting room while the last men sat in their chairs. “Welcome back gentlemen. I hope you all enjoyed the off-season. As you have probably heard, the management and I are in agreement that this team needs some radical changes to be able to reach our goal of getting to the playoffs this season. The game has changed and so will we. We have many new faces on the team and finalized the roster today when we signed our newest player this afternoon. I will want all the newest players in the press room to meet with the press after today’s practice.”
“Thom, who is he? I don’t see him here,” Connor called out. He had seen all the new “kids” on the Internet over the break or via team emails but this new guy was a mystery to them all.
“I was getting to that, Connor. I would like to remind you that we are doing things a little different and all of you will have to adapt to the changes and that will now have to include the locker room,” Thom told the men and watched their reactions to what he had just said. The players looked confused and a quiet rumble began to fill the room as they wondered who the new mystery player was. “Guys, meet your newest team member, Barbara ‘Bobbie’ Burke.”
As he said her name, Bobbie took a step away from the group of coaches and trainers and looked at the shocked faces of her new teammates. At first, the seated men looked as if they were as frozen as the ice they skated on. Then the mumbling began. She stood in front of the team, all their eyes on her. Bobbie wore a plain gray pants suit, her only suit, with boring flat black shoes. Her long blond hair, cut all to one length, was tied back away from her face. Bobbie, as she preferred to be called, didn’t feel comfortable wearing makeup, not that she needed any for her icy blue eyes to shine. Even though she had no experience with the normal things girls liked, like make up and clothes more feminine than a hockey jersey and jeans, and would deny it if confronted, she was a very beautiful woman. She looked over the sea of professional hockey players that she had seen on TV and realized she was now one of them.
“Thom, you have got to be joking, right? I know we were in the bottom of our conference but she’s not for real, right?” Gene Stevens, a right wing man asked, not wanting to mention that they really ended last season at the bottom of the league.
“This is not a joke, Gene. Bobbie’s as much a member of the team as you are,” Thom responded, knowing this was just the tip of the testosterone iceberg.
“So where’d she play, the ‘Ice Capades’ or ‘Stars on Ice’?” a voice asked from within the ranks.
“I played for New England State and the leagues in the Boston area,” Bobbie finally said. She was getting annoyed but knew this was always how it went when she joined a team. She had to keep her cool in front of them, at least until they got on to the ice. The rumblings continued and she could feel their stares raking over her body.
Before Bobbie could say anything else, Doug interrupted her. “Okay guys, that’s enough for now. Be on the ice in twenty minutes.”
“She’s not changing with us?” another player asked, concerned.
“No, now get ready for practice,” Doug told them.
The team got up from their chairs and began to file into the joining locker room. Bobbie was shown down the hall to a small locker room where she could change. Alone in her locker room as she dressed, she was still in disbelief of the events of the past few days. Three days ago, Bobbie was working at the rink as she always did, teaching lessons and getting ready for the next season’s league to begin. She vividly remembered the scout coming up to her at the rink at the end of a private lesson she taught. Usually when a scout approached her, it was to find out where a teammate or student was, but this time he was looking for her and made her an offer that she had only ever dreamed of. She had convinced herself years ago that something like this would never happen to her but now it really was.

On the ice, Bobbie arrived with about half the team already there. She could tell they were all talking about her and not being nice or quiet about it. She was used to it by now. It wasn’t often that a team immediately liked the idea of their boat getting rocked by her presence. It didn’t bother her too much. She had learned to have a tough skin especially when it came to hockey. It was a good thing she gave as good as she got.
A few minutes later the team was ready to begin the first practice of training camp. After warm ups, the front line was separated from the defense to work. Bobbie knew this was going to be a tough practice and the others were not going to be giving her any breaks, not she wanted them to.
When she did get the puck, Bobbie did what she always did. She moved the puck around and made a quick and accurate shot on goal, right past the shoulder of the goalie, or she made a direct pass to one of the other players. Connor was pleased and impressed with what he saw in her game but wondered how she could take a hit by one of the massive defensemen. That didn’t take too long to find that out.
An hour after the team stepped on to the ice, the team was divided up for a scrimmage. Bobbie was Connor’s center as they began to play with the warning from Doug to keep it easy that day. They didn’t need any injuries before the season even began.
In the face off, Bobbie was up against Gene Stevens. “So, you think you can play with the big boys?” he asked as they leaned in.
She raised an eyebrow and said, “Played with bigger,” with a stone cold expression right before the puck was dropped. Bobbie was quick and was able to win the face off. She passed it to her left wing but he was unable to do anything with it. Bobbie thought even some of peewees would have been able to get that pass. As the scrimmage continued, she saw simple things happen that shouldn’t for players at this level.
Bobbie took some pretty hard hits, some of them knocking the wind from her, but every single time she went down she got back up and continued on as if nothing had happened. When she had opportunities to give hits, they weren’t devastating but they did knock a few of the guys from their skates.

 
 

It’s almost time! October 7, 2008

Filed under: Fire and Ice,Update — Karen @ 12:59 pm

As we speak “Fire and Ice” is being printed!  It’s very exiting for me.  The proof looks amazing and I really can’t wait to see the final version.

We are working hard at getting the shopping cart set up on FireballPublishing.net.  We’re almost there and as soon as we have it working the E-Copy will be available for purchase in addition to the book (that looks fantastic).  The E-Copy will be available in both pdf and mobi formats and I’m looking into the Kindle format.

So to tide you guys over till everything is up and working, I’ll be posting the first chapeter in a few parts starting TOMORROW.  I really hope you enjoy it!

 
 
 

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